Tana Banana!

awhh, thanks anyways :) here's the next chapter for anyone else. enjoy! Chapter Two Grace took a long, loving look around her dorm. It was very spacious and the walls ...

Wow, this is really really good! Great hooks-- I couldn't stop reading until I had completely finished :) Continue on! One thing though-- some of the lines can be a ...

Hehe, thanks! :) I'll post some more after this once I get some more feedback. Chapter One “Good morning, students!” A voice sounded over all the murmurs of first day ...

I've always had major problems working on just one story. I guess I have so many ideas running through my head at once that picking just ONE is two hard. ...

Keyboard. Though I have been caught using a crayon ;)

Well done, but try to get more description in about the others. The reader gets a good look at the narrator but not so much the people she's with. I ...

Prologue: 2 Years Prior It was 11 pm on Saturday night. An hour past the Wayland Academy curfew, most girls had already retired to their rooms and were prepping for ...

Your writing techniques are completely gripping. Your opening paragraphs were everything opening paragraphs should ever be: shocking, mysterious and alluring. And of course, grammatically correct :)

Are the majority of your close friends guys or girls? Well, since I attend an all girls' school, Todd, the headmistress' son is pretty much the only guy i'm friends ...

Hehe, thanks everyone for making me feel so welcome :)

I love your style of writing. It's so smooth and confronts the issues, but is very witty and entertaining and the same time. Great read! :)

Hi everyone! My name's Montana. Well, MT. I'm 15 & obviously, I like to write. :D Can't wait to get to talk to some fellow "young writers"!